[Shirt] The Dire Side of the Moon

Discussion in 'Studio D'Art' started by toscomovil., Sep 11, 2015.

  1. toscomovil.

    toscomovil. Well-Known Member

    Hi guys, i made a shirt design and wanted some feedback.

    The Dire Side of the Moon Shirt

    Also if you could rate it in the workshop that would be nice too :D

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    Last edited: Sep 11, 2015
  2. LostENT

    LostENT Well-Known Member

    Got an error when trying to access that page.
     
  3. toscomovil.

    toscomovil. Well-Known Member

  4. LostENT

    LostENT Well-Known Member

    Now it's working, sweet design dude.. very Pink Floyd
     
  5. RisaStoleMyHart

    RisaStoleMyHart Well-Known Member

    5/10 Pink Floyd parody.
     
  6. Lycan

    Lycan Administrator

    remove one grey line outo f the image turning it into 5 lines instead of 6, Which keeps the balance removes the symmetry which makes it more interesting. As well as 5 players per team. The detail of the font don't really match the depth of the art piece.The small line in the middle mountainpeak doesn't fit with the rest since it's either to thin or the rest needs more detail. Other than that nice concept just needs a bit more tweaking on the work.