Epics and Legends Writing Battle XIII

Discussion in 'Fiction & Literature' started by Strange_Kid, Feb 1, 2013.

  1. CynthiaCrescent

    CynthiaCrescent Well-Known Member

    Well I did see that, but I expected more.
  2. vijju1234567890

    vijju1234567890 Well-Known Member

    Exactly my point. CC got a small review......

    Ok , I read it........much of things were just out of my mind , including how it was sucide mission or why did the man at last felt a death situation.

    But if something , your descriptive skills are at their best. The way you potray character emotions and all is something to learn.